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- 1、求一篇英语作文
- 2、HKDSE english writing partA 求改
- 3、壮一帆的主要作品
- 4、绿野仙踪英文版读后感
- 5、my dream手抄报英语简单
- 6、英语作文：(开头)I had a dream last night.In my dream,I…
求一篇英语作文
Computer has a short history but its devolopment is exceedingly fast. It seeems that we cannot work without computer.
In today’s office building, computers can be seen everywhere. Salesmen use computers to contact foreign people by email, by MSN. Engineers use computers to analyze the data and manage the database. Smart businessmen use computers to do business at Taobao and Ebay. Computers are applied in almost every aspect of our life. Can we live without computers? The answer is a loud “No!”. Because computer gives us a brand-new life, a colorful life, a magic life.
With the development of the information technology, now we are able to get information in various ways. In the past, books are the most effective way to get knowledge. Nowadays, we have electronic publication(电子刊物) which are free to download and easy to read it. That is one of the reasons that libraries become quiet. Besides, apart from watching TV，we are able to surf the internet and watch what we like without any annoying advertisement. Isn’t that fantastic? The internet allows us to find whatever you want. You can even ask some on-line experts about some professional knowledge. On the internet, impossible is nothing. However, the development of the Internet is a double-edged sword. Among various information, some information like violence, pornography which have gradually affected young people even kids who are most vulnerable to outside interference. Some young people also indulge themselves in electronic games out of control, which is waste of money and time and their valuable youth. So some proper measurements should be taken to protect our young generation. And some laws about Internet Safety should be carried out strictly.
Talking about computer, one person quickly comes into my mind. That’s Bill Gates, one of the world’s richest men. He has set up his Microsoft Kingdom and changed the whole world. His dream that most of the families would have a computer has already come true in big city. Computer is no long a luxury good for us common people. It has become a necesity. We should respect this man and admire him. He creates the information age, and information age (信息时代) creates his career.
Thanks to computer, we are able to say whatever we like on the internet. Blog, Qzone, Renren are perfect places for us to write down our feelings and our stories. And our friends will see it and leave their blessings or feelings. We are no longer alone. But meanwhile, every coin has two sides. Since we surf thie internet with a virtual name (opposite to the system of real name), war of words can be seen almost in every corner of the internet. I don’t think this is a disaster. On the contray, it is appreciable. People’s different opinions should not be covered by the authority. They should be heard. This is rightful human right. On the Internet, the darkness of the society and political corruption are exposed. We always advocate that the justice should be carried forward. Problems should be argued before just conclusion.
等待。。
字数太多，我尽快完成。这辈子没写过这么长的文章。楼主耐心。完全手写。
HKDSE english writing partA 求改
To travel to the United Kingdom was my dream …. Last month I was there …! You can see how delighted we were from the photos below. The first sightseeing itinerary was Fantasy Park. It was a famous theme park praised by travelers in Europe for its animals (theme). [这与下文不配合?] The theme park successfully made people joyful by its colours. [读Blog未必认识你，所以as you know错用] I rushed to the Crazy Zone to play something exciting because I like thrills. [作文时常用同一个字来形容是不会高分: like excitement = play…exciting基本上覆述自己，学多一些类同词汇作文才有层次] The [] roller coaster … roller coaster there. [level是中文–删去不影响。文法这句已结束] It was so tall
huge and curved! [两句如结合要连接词] My face was almost tore by the wind [wind是自然风-你想说的因加速而产生的气流]and my heart was beating quickly. [要带读者进入情景…可以先描述As we climbed to top
about 100 feet above
and speeding down the track almost vertically towards the earth
my face…] …. This was the best ride ever! I would like … too many people queuing [crowed是一堆人的拥挤] and [predict用错字] I estimated we would spend …
…. In the park
[] staff dressed up as animals. Their costumes were [merely= 只不过是(眨意)-用错字] exquisite … with their movement/imitation/dancing [posture=姿态(不动的)-用错字]. I [required=必须=一定要-用错字] was dying to take photos with them. [was dying是英文的很想渴望要达成心愿的意思-不是死去中] I felt I became …. After playing and watching the show
we felt hungry
[写游记要交代当时背景情形] my dad suggested eating lunch in Spaghetti House. Originally I felt joyful
but the waitress [destroyed用错字] upset my ? feelings. She was so rude in taking orders. Nevertheless
the [fragrant是香水/花香…不是食物香味…食物香味???] of spaghetti gradually subsided [eliminated用错字] our anger. … I almost vomited. My dad demanded to have the dish changed
but none of the staff was …. With rage
we hadn’t eat anything and left the restaurant. It was the biggest disappointment on that day. I hope I … in the next trip[itinerary=日程表-不是旅程].
参考: 写游记和记叙文有些文法规则: past tense(无论记事或是感受都一样)，不能在同时有past tense和present tense(如果你说是DSE我想会扣很多分)和注意表达时的风格是描述还是评论，你文章里用了很多gerund和present participle:一开始就Traveling in…全篇是一种第三身写作(在英国游历是..)的风格，但blog是第一身的风格(我会用To travel to the UK: 去英国游历是..)，所以在写作风格或词汇的配合上会出现格格不入的感觉。总体而言：英文词汇缺乏和错用中文意思类近的英文字，句子格式未太掌握用主观第一身和第三身说事之间的写法
---The HKDSE eng writing partA--blog entry--with error and corrections:- ---You should use synonym for verb; just like mark exact points on listening partA with no synonym. (1)---there with my family ! (2)and praised by (3)to have an exciting discovery. (4)was almost torn (5)but it was (6)At the beginning I felt--- (7)Dad requested to see the change of the dish. (8)next item on route on itinerary. --Obviously
there are correction in a way different from that of a more petent examinor
but characteristic of their experience
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and mastery of English Grammar are the same in this ect.
壮一帆的主要作品
花组时代（1996～2001年）
--（当时花组主演男役：爱华みれ）--
1999年8～12月 “ Tango Argentino /The Revue '99”新人公演/Mike（本役：春野寿美礼）
2000年4月 “源氏物语 あさきゆめみし”新人公演/头中将（本役：匠ひびき）
2000年6月 德意志・柏林公演“宝冢 雪・月・花”“Sunrise Takarazuka ”
2000年11月～2001年3月“ Ludwig II世/ASIAN SUNRISE”新人公演/Dirkheim伯爵（本役：伊织直加）
2001年4月 Bow Hall公演“Manon”Miguel
雪组时代（2001～2006年）
--（当时雪组主演男役：轰悠）--
2001年10月～2002年2月 “爱燃える/Rose Garden”新人公演：吴王夫差（本役:轰悠）*新公初主演
--（当时雪组主演男役：絵麻绪ゆう）--
2002年4月 歌剧团88周年记念公演・日生剧场“Gone with the Wind（乱世佳人）”Rene Picard
2002年5～9月 “追忆的巴塞罗纳/ON THE 5th”新人公演：Francisco（本役:絵麻绪ゆう）*新公主演
--（当时雪组主演男役：朝海ひかる）--
2002年10～11月 BowHall・日本青年馆公演“Hopscotch”Christopher*与立树遥・音月桂三人主演
2003年1～5月 “春丽の淡き光に/Joyful!!”源赖信
2003年3月 Bow Hall公演Work Shop“春ふたたび”藤原道忠*主演
2003年6月 Bow Hall・日本青年馆公演“American Pie”Jackson（男2）
2003年8～12月“Romance de Paris/Les Collages”Didier
2004年1月 Bow Hall・日本青年馆公演“送られなかった手纸（未曾送出的信）”Dimitri *Bow+东上单独初主演
2004年4～7月 “スサノオ（须佐之男）/Takarazuka Glory!”月读
2004年8～9月 日本青年馆・Drama City公演“あの日见た梦に（那一日的梦中）”Steve（男2）
2004年11月～2005年2月 “青い鸟を捜して（寻找青鸟）/Takarazuka's Dream Kingdom”Milborne
2005年4月 Bow Hall公演“さすらいの果てに（直到流浪的尽头）”Jeffrey少尉 *主演
2005年6～10月 “雾之米兰/Wonderland”Ercole Barone
2005年11～12月 Bow Hall・日本青年馆公演“DAYTIME HUSTLER”Heywood（男2）
2006年2～5月 “凡尔赛玫瑰～奥斯卡编～”Melchior / Gerodelle（二役）
2006年6月 全国公演“凡尔赛玫瑰～奥斯卡编～”安德烈（男2）
2006年9～12月 “堕天使之涙/Tarantella!”Edmond de Rainier
花组时代（2007年～）
--（当时花组主演男役：春野寿美礼）--
2007年2～5月 “明智小五郎の事件簿－黒蜥蜴－/TUXEDO JAZZ”波越警部
2007年7月 梅田艺术剧场公演“源氏物语 あさきゆめみしII”头中将
2007年8月 晚餐秀“SO! Fantastic Radio Station”
2007年9～12月 “ Adieu Marseille /Love Symphony”Maurice de Broca
--（当时花组主演男役：真飞圣）--
2008年2月 中日剧场公演“Melancholic Gigolo / Love SymphonyⅡ”Stan（男2）
2008年5～8月 “爱与死的阿拉伯/Red Hot Sea”Tussun
2008年10月 全国公演“外传凡尔赛玫瑰−亚兰编−/Enter the Revue”安德烈（男2）
2009年1月～3月 “太王四神记”火天会大长老
2009年5月 Bow Hall・日本青年馆公演“オグリ！～小栗判官物语より～”小栗判官 *主演
2009年7月 梅田艺术剧场Main Hall “ME AND MY GIRL”Sir John Tremayne / Jaqueline Carstone（二役）
2009年9月～11月 “外传凡尔赛玫瑰−安德烈编−/EXCITER!!”亚兰 *二番手披露
（2009年9月4日～10月5日：宝冢大剧场、10月23日～11月22日：东京宝冢剧场）
2009年12月～2010年1月、“相棒”（（C）朝日电视台・东映）神戸尊
（2009年12月23日～2010年1月6日：梅田艺术剧场Drama City、2010年1月15日～1月22日：日本青年馆）
2010年3月~5月，“虞美人−新的传说−”刘邦
（2010年3月12日～4月12日：宝冢大剧场、4月30日～5月30日：东京宝冢剧场）
2010年7月～10月，“丽しのサブリナ（龙凤配）/EXCITER!!”David Larrabee
（2010年7月30日～8月30日：宝冢大剧场、9月17日～10月17日：东京宝冢剧场）
2010年11月～12月 全国公演“Melancholic Gigolo / Love Symphony”Stan
2011年2～4月 “Prelude of Love / Le Paradis!!”Joseph Barkley
（2011年2月4日～3月7日：宝冢大剧场、3月25日～4月24日：东京宝冢剧场）
5月 壮一帆晚餐秀“Bright−ブライト−”
（2011年5月4日～5日：宝冢HOTEL、5月7日～8日：第一HOTEL东京）
--（当时花组主演男役：兰寿とむ·下任）--
2011年6月~9月“PHANTOM”Gerard Carriere
(2011年6月24日～7月25日：宝冢大剧场、8月12日～9月11日：东京宝冢剧场）
10月～11月 “Canary”Vim *主演（梅芸DramaCity ・日本青年馆公演）
2012年
1月 - 3月『复活－恋が终わり、爱が残った－/カノン』 シェンボック
4月 - 5月 全国ツアー『长い春の果てに/カノン』クロード
7月 - 10月『サン=テグジュペリ/CONGA!!』ギヨメ
雪组トップ时代
2013年
2月 『若き日の呗は忘れじ/Shining Rhythm!』（中日剧场） 就任雪组TOP前披
4月～7月『ベルサイユのばら -フェルゼン编-』フェルゼン 就任雪组TOP披露目
8月 - 9月 全国ツアー『若き日の呗は忘れじ/ナルシス・ノアールII』 牧文四郎 *予定
11月 - 翌年2月 『Shall we ダンス?/CONGRATULATIONS 宝冢!!』 ヘイリー・ハーツ *予定
2014年
3月 - 4月 ドラマシティ・日本青年馆公演 『心中・恋の大和路』 *予定
6月 - 8月 『一梦庵风流记 前田庆次/My Dream TAKARAZUKA』 *予定 2002年 ‘ホップ・スコッチ’（立树遥・音月桂とトリプル主演）
2004年 ‘送られなかった手纸’（単独初主演）
2009年 ‘オグリ! ～小栗判官物语より～’
BOWHALL主演
2003年 ‘春ふたたび’（WS）
2005年 ‘さすらいの果てに’（WS）
晚餐秀
2007年 ‘SO! Fantastic Radio Station’（演出：中村暁）
2011年 ‘Bright−ブライト−’（演出：冈田敬二）
梅芸DRAMACITY・青年馆主演
2011年 ‘Canary’
2012年 『So in Love』（演出：中村一徳）
绿野仙踪英文版读后感
绿野仙踪的故事大家看完以后的感想有哪些呢，下面一起去阅读我为你整理的绿野仙踪英文版读后感吧，希望对你有帮助！
绿野仙踪英文版读后感1
I recently read a book oz.
The wizard of oz, a feature of the fairy tale. The author of this book is to Bob frank baumschulenweg. The hero is a little more, name, Laura she held a puppy, and her uncle Henry, amber sister-in-law, living in the central Kansas prairie. Because a tornado, she and her dog is coiled in a strange world, they find immortals let oneself go home. She met a "no" and "no brain scarecrow of tin man" and "the lion" gutless, they became friends, and rose to find immortals, dasey way has a lot of strange things. Finally, the scarecrow became the emerald city leaders, who became the leader, WenJi people become an old lion king of the forest, dasey and her dog rose back home.
Friends are very precious. With the scarecrow, dasey rose more than iron and the lion, never met together, and then to friends together and help each other, the results achieved their desire. If much rose to the strange world dasey, did not meet the scarecrow, perhaps she will they not return back to Kansas prairie, uncle Henry and amber not. Sister-in-law, At the strange world, more prosperous, dasey rose can either slaves, either a vagrant life.
Friends are very important. In you encounter difficulties, need the help of friends, When you are in trouble, friends will help you, then you can well solve the difficulties. Friends are very important, you must cherish him: everyone should help each other and love each other, and establish friendship, solidarity, not because little things over, the friendship between friends.
But our classmate did not help each other, but the fight with each other, at others. But we are friends, we should help each other just rightness. We have six years old classmate, is not damaged the six years of friendship, still have a long way behind, we still want to help, how can it destroyed it?
Friends are very rare and very important, we must cherish him, and make our life more beautiful
《绿野仙踪》是一个长篇的童话故事。这本书的作者是美国的来曼·弗兰克·鲍姆。故事中的主人公是一位小姑娘，名字叫多萝茜，她抱着一只小狗，和她的亨利叔叔、艾姆嫂嫂生活在堪萨斯州大草原的中部。因为一次龙卷风，她和她的小狗被卷到一个奇怪的世界，她们去找仙人让自己回到家里去。路上，她遇到了“没有脑的稻草人”“没有心的铁皮人”“没有胆子的狮子”，他们成为了朋友，与多萝茜一同去找仙人，途中有很多希奇古怪的事。最后，稻草人成为了翡翠城的首领，铁皮人成了温基人的领导者，狮子成为了一个古老的森林的.王，多萝茜和她的小狗回到了家里。
朋友是很珍贵的。多萝茜与稻草人、铁皮人和狮子，从不相识到朋友，然后一同共度难关，互相帮助，结果实现了他们的心愿。假如多萝茜到了那奇怪的世界，没有遇到稻草人他们，或许她就永远回不了堪萨斯州大草原，回不了亨利叔叔和艾姆嫂嫂身边了。留在那奇怪的世界，多萝茜不能过上好日子，要么是奴隶，要么就是过上流浪的生活。
朋友很重要。在你遇到困难时，需要朋友的帮助；当你遇到麻烦时，朋友会帮助你，那么你就能很好地解决困难。朋友很重要，你得珍惜他：大家应该互相帮助，建立友谊，互相友爱，团结一致，不会因为一点小事情而争吵，破坏了朋友之间的友谊。
而我们的同学却不是互相帮助的，而是互相打架，嘲笑他人。可是我们同学就是朋友，我们应该互相帮助才对啊。我们已是六年的老同学，不能破坏了这六年的友谊，后面的路还长着呢，我们还是要大家的帮助，怎么能就这样破坏了它呢？
朋友很珍贵、很重要，我们要珍惜他，让我们的生活变得更美好
绿野仙踪英文版读后感2
During the summer vacation, I read a book by Robert frank baumschulenweg lehmann compilation book of fairy tales oz, this book took me into a fairy kingdom, make me feel pure dream. The story made me have changed more than before, I become more confident and dare.
The wizard of oz in fictional oz, Kansas, USA, the little girl cried rose by more than a tornado winding MengJiJin called the place, good witch advice to her emerald city to find otzi nus warlock help drive her home. The road, she has met the scarecrow he needed a deputy head, Ironhide woodcutter he needed a heart, Cowardly lion he need courage. They go together, and encourage each other, help each other, overcoming the difficulties, and finally came to the city of jade. Because of their excellent performance, large warlock help them realize their wishes, scarecrow gets a deputy head, Ironhide woodcutter had a heart, Timid lion got guts, rose, dasey also with dog toto returned to his hometown, returned to the family.
In the process of reading, dasey rose more than I thought, dasey rose is my good friend, seem to my heart and with more experience of rose from time to time, dasey rejoice, tension, amazing, sorry. Her brave performance, the kind heart, strong will, let me feel very small, for his cowardice and very embarrassed. Because long ago, I saw a dog was afraid. Sometimes I asked myself: "if I was not as I will, Lola Lola as bravely dasey more difficulties, and help others?" After watching the fairy tale, I am determined to more like courage, dasey rose as with unremitting pursuit and struggle spirit to face all kinds of difficulties and overcome study, the life of all factors, bravely challenges, I believe I can do it!
I like the wizard of oz, it lets me have a good friend - dasey; more rose. I like the wizard of oz, it brings me happiness, I like the wizard of oz, it gives me courage, I like the wizard of oz!
中文：暑假期间，我读了一本由莱曼·弗兰克·鲍姆编写的童话书《绿野仙踪》，这本书把我带进了童话王国，使我感受到了纯真的梦幻。书中的故事也使我有了很大的改变，我变得比以前更敢、更自信了。
《绿野仙踪》以虚构的奥兹国为背景，讲述了美国堪萨斯州的小姑娘多萝茜被龙卷风卷到了一个叫孟奇金的地方，好心的女巫指点她到翡翠城去找奥兹国大术士帮忙送她回家。路上，她先后遇到了稻草人，他需要一副脑子；铁皮樵夫，他需要一颗心；胆小狮子，他需要胆量。他们结伴而行，互相鼓励、互相帮助，克服了一个又一个困难，终于来到了翡翠城。由于他们的出色的表现，大术士帮助他们实现各自的愿望，稻草人得到了一副脑子；铁皮樵夫得到了一颗心；胆小狮子得到了胆量，多萝茜也如愿，带着小狗托托回到了家乡，回到了亲人身边。
在读书的过程中，多萝茜占据了我的思想，多萝茜似乎就是我好朋友，我的心也随着多萝茜的经历不时地欢喜、紧张、惊异、难过。她那勇敢的表现、善良的心地、坚强的意志，让我感到自己很渺小，为自己的懦弱而很不好意思。因为以前，我一看见狗就害怕。有时我会问自己：“如果我是多萝茜，我会不会像多萝茜一样勇敢地克服重重困难、并帮助其他人呢？”看完这部童话后，我决心像多萝茜一样鼓足勇气，用不懈地追求和奋斗的精神来面对各种困难，克服学习上、生活上的一切不利因素，勇敢地挑战自我，我相信我一定能做到！
我喜欢《绿野仙踪》，它让我有了好朋友———多萝茜；我喜欢《绿野仙踪》，它给我带来快乐；我喜欢《绿野仙踪》，它给我带来勇气；我喜欢《绿野仙踪》！
my dream手抄报英语简单
英语手抄报可以先画好模板，留下需要写字的空行，在画完手抄报后有的时候不知道往里面写什么内容，其实可以给手抄报添加关于英语的名言警句等内容，让我们的手抄报更丰富。
英语的名言警句：
1、For man is man and master of his fate. 人就是人，是自己命运的主人。
2、The voice of one man is the voice of no one. 一个人的声音没有力量。
3、Storms make trees take deeper roots.风暴使树木深深扎根。
4、Actions speak louder than words. 行动比语言更响亮。
5、Love rules his kingdom without a sword. 爱，统治了他的王国，不用一枝利剑。
英语作文：(开头)I had a dream last night.In my dream,I…
写作思路：所给要求的意思是在昨晚自己做了一个梦，那么就可以展开合理的想象，可以写自己在吗，梦里得到了一匹飞马，自己骑着飞马到处溜达的故事等等。
正文：
I had a dream last night. In my dream, I dreamed that a flying horse came to me, and it was the queen of the flying horses!
我昨晚做了个梦，在梦里，我梦见一匹飞马来到我身边，而且它还是飞马中的女王呢！
So I rode it to the door of my friend's house, it called a Pegasus, we came to the beautiful Pegasus kingdom.
于是我骑着它来到了我朋友家的门前，它叫来了别外一匹飞马，我们一起来到了美丽的飞马王国。
"Wow" it's so beautiful here! " In front of you is the rainbow staircase. I followed Pegasus into a beautiful room. There is a crystal button on the door. When I press that button, it shows "welcome, master".
“哇”这里真是太美了！”眼前就是彩虹楼梯。我跟着飞马走进了一间美丽的房间，门上有一个水晶按钮，一按那个按钮，上面就是显示着“主人欢迎您的到来”。
Entering the door, Pegasus said mysteriously, "my master, can we go to a place together now?" I felt my head suspiciously and asked, "where are you going?" It said, "I won't tell you. Please follow me." When I got there, I couldn't help shouting. It was a fairyland on earth.
走进门，飞马神秘地说：“我的主人，现在我们可以一起去一个地方了吗？”我疑惑地摸了摸脑袋问：“要去什么地方？”它说：“我就不告诉你，请跟我走。”来到那，我不禁大叫了一声，那里简直就是人间仙境。
We went down the sky slide together and got on the cloud plane. There were many buttons on the cloud plane. I pressed a red button, a bottle of juice I like to drink appeared in front of me, I pressed the purple button again, and a teddy bear appeared... Amazing!
我们一起顺着天空滑滑梯，坐上了云朵飞机，在上面转啊转，云朵飞机上有很多按钮，我按了个红色键，一瓶我喜欢喝的果汁出现在我面前，我又按了紫色键，一个玩具熊出现了……太神奇了！
Then, we got off the cloud plane and came to another room. There was a big screen here. When I touched it with my hand, many beautiful moral education stories appeared on the screen. I was really dazzled. I chose one and sat there watching it with relish.
接着，我们下了云朵飞机，来到另一间房间，这里有一个很大的屏幕，我手轻轻一碰，屏幕上出现了很多好看的德育故事，真是看得眼花缭乱，我选了一部，坐在那津津有味地看了起来。
"Ding Ding Ding" I was woken up by the alarm clock, ah! It's an interesting dream. If only it were true!
“叮叮叮“我被闹钟吵醒了，啊！真是一场有趣的梦，如果这是真的那该多好呀！
